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Post by AnJl Mon Mar 25, 2013 6:14 am

I had just finished making a movie called The Message. It is a 6 minute short film and the first I have ever done.



Please do tell me what you think about the movie and any criticism/points you would like to give are more than welcome.

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Post by AnJl Fri Mar 29, 2013 5:21 am

Little underwhelming that no one bothered to reply..... Neutral

It would have been nice to get some feedback on the movie.

Anyway, thanks to who ever took time to watch it.
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Post by Vibe Fri Mar 29, 2013 5:22 am

I will watch and give feedback as soon as I get back from work Thumbs up
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Post by AnJl Fri Mar 29, 2013 5:38 am

Really appreciate it Vibe. Thumbs up
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Post by CBarca Fri Mar 29, 2013 5:48 am

I'm sorry, I didn't even see this. I'll watch it and while I probably can't give any good or valid criticism, I'll be more than glad to tell you whatever you want to hear.
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Post by Vibe Fri Mar 29, 2013 7:24 pm

I watched it as promised,I just wish I had anything to say,I don't know shit about this kind of film.

Is this a one time thing,a hobby or something you would like to do professionally?Maybe if I knew where you were heading with this I could have an idea what to tell you.
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Post by The Lizard King Sat Mar 30, 2013 9:12 pm

I liked it.

Good camera angles and takes.

Fair use of lighting

And really well edited.

No point in commenting about the acting, since it's an amateur production. But overall, well done buddy. My favorite scene was the one with the girl walking out of her "office" building. Would've wanted that to last longer ( the contrast with the large open space outside the bldg ), to emphasize how alone she was. The dialogue could've used some work too, but again, it's an amateur production so one can't nitpick. Good effort in the end !
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Post by ronalessi Sat Mar 30, 2013 11:40 pm

fps - I would prefer it to be more movie-like, 24 fps.
Colour - I would prefer some colour enhancements
Dialogues - could be better.
Actors - well...you work with what you have, I guess. The villain was not bad - has potential.

btw, the guy on the phone during the bus scene sounded a little like Hrithik Roshan. eco smile

This is your first one. Well done.
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