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Post by pasquale22 Wed Jul 04, 2012 11:26 am

http://360scouting.blogspot.com.au/

comments would be much appreciated Smile
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Post by Kick Wed Jul 04, 2012 12:13 pm

Good read, I like how you think he would be good for Arsenal, is that because he is french?
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Post by donttreadonred Wed Jul 04, 2012 3:56 pm

No offense mate, but you'll want to proofread things a bit more before "publishing" them online. You've got several typos in your article, including misspellings (quiet instead of quite) and improper pronouns (there is a place, their is a possessive pronoun).

Overall, not a bad effort.
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