A small snippet of a track I'm working on
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A small snippet of a track I'm working on
http://soundcloud.com/tekk-nf/gotham !
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Re: A small snippet of a track I'm working on
I love the chorus man....I'm not too qualified to comment on the verse and what not but it's flows right in and out from the mellow chorus.
But it's great.
But it's great.
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Re: A small snippet of a track I'm working on
Thanks Josh!
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I take it you are the rapper. Need to work on your delivery. Seems to be lacking character. Just my opinion.
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I think, for the most part, your flow goes well with the instrumental. I'd be curious to compare to another track to see how your rhyme style suits to a different tempo (also your mic presence).
Started off a little shaky with the first 2 bars, but you did good.
Started off a little shaky with the first 2 bars, but you did good.
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Thanks everyone!
To show Adny what he wants, I uploaded another snippet of another track I'm working on :
http://soundcloud.com/tekk-nf/mountains
To show Adny what he wants, I uploaded another snippet of another track I'm working on :
http://soundcloud.com/tekk-nf/mountains
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