A small snippet of a track I'm working on

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Post by Ali Sat Mar 10, 2012 7:41 pm

http://soundcloud.com/tekk-nf/gotham !
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Post by Le Samourai Sun Mar 11, 2012 2:11 pm

I love the chorus man....I'm not too qualified to comment on the verse and what not but it's flows right in and out from the mellow chorus.



But it's great. Very Happy
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Post by Ali Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:48 am

Thanks Josh! Very Happy
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Post by poolsupporter Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:42 am

I take it you are the rapper. Need to work on your delivery. Seems to be lacking character. Just my opinion.
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Post by adnyana179 Sat Mar 17, 2012 9:16 am

I think, for the most part, your flow goes well with the instrumental. I'd be curious to compare to another track to see how your rhyme style suits to a different tempo (also your mic presence).

Started off a little shaky with the first 2 bars, but you did good.
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Post by Ali Sat Mar 17, 2012 10:11 am

Thanks everyone!

To show Adny what he wants, I uploaded another snippet of another track I'm working on :

http://soundcloud.com/tekk-nf/mountains
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